tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5847742045559711907.post4214510001448882920..comments2023-10-15T08:34:26.898-07:00Comments on Kyle Kemp - BA (Hons) Computer Animation Arts - UCA Rochester: Le Voyage Dans La Lune (1902) Film ReviewAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03708696773345086155noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5847742045559711907.post-12101060992401354682013-09-25T14:30:17.388-07:002013-09-25T14:30:17.388-07:00Ah Thanks Phil :DAh Thanks Phil :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03708696773345086155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5847742045559711907.post-60260778658762285162013-09-25T13:32:36.092-07:002013-09-25T13:32:36.092-07:00Hi Kyle, the number after the year relates to the ...Hi Kyle, the number after the year relates to the page number where the quote is from originally in the book :)tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5847742045559711907.post-18398223453167998402013-09-25T10:28:25.730-07:002013-09-25T10:28:25.730-07:00Thank you, I'll make the changes right now :) ...Thank you, I'll make the changes right now :) a quick question i've seen on the UCA guide to refernecing that when using a direct quotation you include a name and year, but do not understand the number after the year? Is it some sort of line number or something else entirely?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03708696773345086155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5847742045559711907.post-76619727364173531212013-09-25T04:48:52.706-07:002013-09-25T04:48:52.706-07:00Whoops! Have just seen your bibliography!! :) Stil...Whoops! Have just seen your bibliography!! :) Still, check out how you reference within the text...Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5847742045559711907.post-4430572471908884342013-09-25T04:47:13.767-07:002013-09-25T04:47:13.767-07:00Hi Kyle!
Well done on getting your first film rev...Hi Kyle!<br /><br />Well done on getting your first film review out there! :)<br /><br />This is generally a very well written and insightful piece, and you are making some very relevant observations. I would just say, that you need to make more use of quotations, and make sure that you both introduce and unpick them thoroughly... have a look here, for some advice on doing this successfully - <br /><br />http://myuca.ucreative.ac.uk/bbcswebdav/pid-243638-dt-content-rid-304615_1/courses/RCGA4002_13/Academic%20writing%20-%20Hints%20%26%20Tips.pdf<br /><br />Also, make sure that you reference everything in the correct manner, and include a bibliography and illustrations list at the end - see here<br /><br /><br />http://community.ucreative.ac.uk/article/27187/Referencing<br /><br />All in all, though, a very promising start! :)Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com